Unusual Piercings

Should I be worried about my son?

My son is 17 years old, will be a senior when school start again. He’s a highly ranked ROTC cadet, varsity wrestler who placed state champion last year, and have been attending community college at night for a year now. I’m proud of everything he have done and accomplished, but there are a couple things [...]

the poem stealing by carol ann duffy..?

okay so i read the stupid poem and now i gotta provide an example of symbolism or a symbol in this poem. can anyone help me out? here’s the poem… The most unusual thing I ever stole? A snowman. Midnight. He looked magnificent; a tall, white mute beneath the winter moon. I wanted him, a [...]

constructive criticism on my writing?

The leaves on the forest floor made a crunching noise as I ran. Through the trees and bushes, past the stream, trying not to trip over any branches strewn across the forest floor. I don’t know whether I was running toward something or someone, or whether I was being chased. Either way, I couldn’t stop [...]

Hey! Tell me what you think of my new novel please!?

Prologue Sometime in 1979… Nothing seemed to stick out about that warm august night; nothing at all. The hot days preceded even hotter nights. The humidity had seen Mallorie not turn on the hot water pump, a rare sight even in the summer time. But tonight was different, after her pleasantly cold shower Mallorie collapsed [...]

Book character names :)?

Main character : Girl, i want a kind of unusual name, but a little bit feminine she is really pretty, wavy blonde hair, blue eyes, but doesn’t think she is pretty, kind of shy, nice, loves to draw i had it as Indiana ( Indi ) but i don’t know if i like it… Her [...]

I need a totally unique and wild name for a character in my book. Any ideas?

I have a wild female character in a book who needs a name. She has long white hair, piercing icy blue eyes, and can change into a white dragon. I need a really wild name for her, specifically something to do with winter. I suppose a name that has something to do with plants, animals, [...]

How is my first chapter?

Ok, I’m writing a Harry Potter fan-fiction (I don’t want any criticism about the fact it’s a fan-fiction, I’ll write it anyway, and I don’t want criticism on the actual idea), and I want to know what people think about my first chapter. I know it’s quite long, but I’m not sure how it is [...]

Would you read more of this?

I have done a lot of editing to this so far and its not done yet. I am only in 8th grade so please tell me what you think. Darkness surrounded me. I couldn’t see anything except the face of a total stranger. She had dark blue eyes and brown hair. She looked like me, [...]

rate/comment on part of my short story number two…?

okay so this is the beginning of a short story im writing. right now, the main character, sophie, is dreaming. The leaves on the forest floor made a crunching noise as I ran. Through the trees and bushes, past the stream, trying not to trip over any branches strewn across the forest floor. I don’t [...]

Weird little thing on my skin…?

I recently noticed a tiny “bead”-feeling thing that I suspected must have been under my skin, not like a bug bite. It was down where the inside of my leg is (the elastic leg hole of my underwear touches where the thing is). The thing was very small, about the size of those studs on [...]